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15 April 2008 @ 03:16 pm
Act 1 うさぎ SAILORMOON  
Introduction: My intention is to create a definitive catalogue of all the changes made to the Sailor Moon manga when it was re-released in 2003 and 2004. It is my goal for these records to be incredibly thorough, to the point of people wondering why I even wrote something down an alteration was so miniscule.  Most changes that were made were not major, and can be missed unless searching for them. There are, however, quite obvious changes as well.

This record goes through each panel of every page, and logs all variances between the originals and re-releases. Major changes are highlighted in orange, and include images that have been fully redrawn, not just cleaned up, and any changes to the dialogue, from added particles to changed attack phrases. All changes use the original releases as points of reference, so you don't need to own the re-releases in order to understand what exactly was changed.

Links to images, where included, direct to Manga Style, Sailor Dream, and The Oracle, all excellent sources when it comes to the manga art and re-releases.

Important note: Japanese text support is needed to view changes to the dialogue; translations and furigana are not provided as of this point in time.

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(This entry references an unknown run of the original first volume, and an (at least) 2nd run edition of the re-release Volume 1. Any changes made between the first and second runs of the re-release will be missed unless pointed out by an outside source.)


Beginning of each Volume 1, side by side comparison:

Old version order of pages (from right to left):
- Black and white title page reading "Act 1 うさぎ - SAILORMOON" [image]
- Black and white official "first page" of Act 1 with Sailor V in the newspaper
- Black and white start of Act 1with Usagi running to school

New version order of pages (from right to left):
+ Page of bonus stickers (first run only) [image]
+ New color illustration of Sailor Moon sitting on a crescent moon [image]
+ New color illustration of Princess Serenity [image]
- Official "first page" of Act 1with Sailor V in the newspaper, now in color [image]
     * stroke around headline "セーラーV大活躍!" is thicker, headline text generally looks sharper
+ (Color) Act 1 title page now spread over two pages [artbook image] [image now]
     * Sailor Moon's costume is updated to be closer to her current costume:
         - gloves changed from gold with crescent moon band to current 3 red bands
         - lace underneath skirt removed, but only on right side
         - back bow changed from white to red, made smaller
         - brooch changed to current gold circle with 4 surrounding circles
         - choker simplified to look more like current brooch (inner circle removed)
         - boomerang object on front of costume removed completely
         - bodysuit simplified to look more like one piece
         - hair ornaments simplified to be closer to current
         - yellow tint added to hair        
         - all other yellow highlights from costume (hair ornaments, shoulders) removed in favor of grey tones
         - cleavage lines removed
         - more stars and small glow effects added to background
+ New table of contents with image of SD dot-eyes Sailor Moon [image]
Text reads:
CONTENTS
Act1 うさぎ SAILORMOON .... 5
Act2 亜美 SAILORMERCURY.... 48
Act3 レイ SAILORMARS...... 81
Act4 Masquerade 仮面舞踏会... 124
Act5 まこと SAILORJUPITER... 166
Act6 タキシード仮面 TUXEDO MASK... 198
(Note: Yes, TUXEDO MASK is the only English term broken up into two words.)

- Black and white comic starts on page 9 in new edition (table of contents reveals page 5, the title page, as the start of the act); in the old version this was on page 3
- For reference sake, the page I am referring to shows Usagi running to school and tripping over something
- both new and old versions have this page on the left side
- The reference page numbers here on out will be lead by the old edition, followed by the new edition in brackets, ex. p. 3 (9)

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Act 1 うさぎ SAILORMOON


p. 3 (9)
- Panel 1 tweaks:
     * close-up of Usagi cleaned up: lines redrawn include her eyebrows (no longer curly), hair part, buns, bangs (longer strands on right side no longer cover ear, and ear moved farther out to be covered by speech bubble), wrinkles on shirt, neck, cleavage line removed, sleeve cuff added on right hand, etc.
     * sketch of bunny in introductory text box ("あたし月野うさぎ...") redrawn (now looks to be no longer drawn by hand)
- Panel 2 tweaks:
     * screentone in background changed (now a sky screen tone)
     * bushes on left side drawn to look shorter, puffs of air removed
     * buildings in background redrawn
     * crying lines by Usagi's "はあ" removed
     * bunny beside intro text box now moved inside it (text moved left to accommodate, bunny remains the same, not redrawn), can now see screentone shadow by Usagi's feet
- Panel 3 text "びたんっ" somehow changed (more screentone dots behind now visible, possible change in thickness of stroke?)
- Panel 4 background screentone changed from random swirly doodles to bunnies and carrots

 p. 4 (10)
- Panel 1 white blob (lack of screentone) around Luna's "きゅうう~" removed, now just a thin stroke around text
- Panel 3 stroke around "ぶっちゅ" cleaned up, now smoother
- Panel 4 border tweaked, now ends on a box at every corner (as opposed to the top left corner which previously featured a single line jutting out)

p. 5 (11)
- Panel 1 cleaned up:
     * specifically, Usagi's buns and the odd hair line redrawn, movement line made by hand tweaked so that it no longer goes through Usagi's mouth, Usagi's right hand sleeve redrawn
     * white dots (scratched screentone) removed off Luna's butt (top right)
     * stroke around sound effect "ブリッ" no longer covers Luna's tail by so much white
- Panel 2 screentone on Luna scratched off (in lines and dots, see left ear for reference) to make it seem sunnier
- Panel 4 tweaks:
     * border around Usagi screaming is changed to larger diamonds, in a lighter grey
     * stars added and changed around Usagi (two small, drawn by hand, added on left; one by mouth redrawn; one screentone star added on right; star by "ぎえっ" changed from hand-drawn to screentone)
- Panel 5 tweaks:
     * screentone and details added to Usagi's school in background (clock fully redrawn, can no longer see hands)
     * end of Usagi's pigtail redrawn

p. 6 (12)
- Panel 3 tweaks:
     * Usagi cleaned up (buns and shirt line art redrawn, belly button no longer visible; face redrawn but in same style (mouth a bit lower as a give-away), screentone on shirt removed)
     * Usagi's legs elongated (same drawing of shoes, just now appear near bottom of page)
     * sweatdrop removed from "んもーっ" speech bubble, and puff of air removed from above it
- Panel 4 tails added to both speech bubbles
- Panel 5 tail added to "えへへ" speech bubble

p. 7 (13)
- Panel 1 changes:
     * screentone star replaces hand-drawn star in "~月野さんっ" speech bubble
     * screentone star added above Haruna (same style as in previous point)
     * sweatdrop removed from "ナニしてんの" speech bubble
     * ellipses removed in front of "ポロッ"
     * text in introductory text box now in smaller font size (also true for the other intro boxes on the page)
     * small speech bubble inside intro text box (that read "チェリ・プロかってね <3") removed completely, replaced by generic bunny sketch (same as from p. 3 (9))
- Panel 2 tweaks:
     * hand-drawn star replaces puff of air above Haruna's head
     * Haruna's hair now visible below her pointing hand
- Panel 3 tweaks:
     * Umino line art slightly altered (hair redrawn but in same style; white collar smaller)
     * Naru line art slightly altered (more lines added on shirt and sleeve)
     * ellipses removed in front of "キーンコーン"
- Panel 4 tweaks:
   * Naru line art slightly altered (more lines added on shirt and sleeve)
   * sweatdrop in "ゲームう?" speech bubble replaced by another one that's smaller and not bold
   * placement of star in "あんたって" speech bubble moved up and to the left

p. 8 (14)
- Panel 1 tweaks:
     * blushing lines on Naru's face removed
     * Usagi line art slightly altered (particularly the hair, but hardly noticable)
- Panel 2 drawing of school altered in same way as p. 5 (11), time on clock no longer visible
- Panel 3 screentone overlapping Yumiko's leg fixed, tree lines above Naru's head removed
- Panel 4 tweaks:
     * Umino line art altered (redrawn bangs and hair)
     * tail added to Umino's speech bubble
     * details added on background art (more leaves on plants, more boxes on shoe cubbies?)
- Panel 5 changes:
     * Sailor V's costume changed to look more like.. her costume! That is, instead of Minako's school uniform, which it looked like before (so shoulder armor added, band on sleeve, screentone)
     * Umino's white collar smaller

p. 9 (15)
- Panel 1 tweaks:
     * Umino's white collar smaller, hair redrawn
     * "ちっちっ" text rewritten smaller, now text and wagging finger do not go outside border
- Panel 3 tweaks:
     * Usagi line art cleaned up, now looks to be in Naoko's new style (hair, proportions of face, mouth smaller)
     * screentone border background changed from diagonal box things to better shaded box things
- Panel 4 tweaks:
     * Naru's mouth made smaller
     * tail added to "きのうから" speech bubble
- Panel 5 changes:
     * drop shadow on picture removed
     * details added to background (more buildings, trees)
     * shading added to Naru's hair
     * tail added to "あたしも" speech bubble

p. 10 (16)
- Panel 1 small star and sparkly detail removed from upper left corner
- Panel 2 short haired classmate's shoulder now fully drawn
- Panel 3 tweaks:
     * screentone stars replace hand drawn sparkle
     * shadow of jewelry added above "ひゃーっ" speech bubble, wrinkle lines simplified on fabric background
- Panel 5 tweaks:
     * "ママ" speech bubble now cut-off and contained within border
     * Mrs. Osaka line art slightly altered (shoulder less round, dark finger nails added)
- Panel 6 tweaks:
     * Mrs. Osaka line art slightly altered (hair on right side)
     * tail added to "さあさあ" speech bubble

p. 11 (17)
- Panel 1  tweaks:
     * removed "ぞ" from hand-drawn speech bubble (does not change meaning)
     * redrawn sweatdrop, strand of hair added to Mrs. Osaka
- Panel 2 hand-drawn sparkles, motion lines added
- Panel 5 lines added to Usagi's hair, shirt
- Panel 6 tweaks:
     * Usagi's left sleeve redrawn (?), now bottom of shirt, top of skirt visible
     * detail lines added on crumpled paper

p. 12 (18)
- Panel 1 tweaks:
     * Usagi line art slightly altered (buns, hair)
     * Mamoru line art slightly altered (line on shirt added, shine on right side of hair removed)
- Panel 2 tweaks:
     * tail added to "いたい" speech bubble (and ellipses removed in front of "いたい")
     * shine of Mamoru's hair simplified (less of it overall)
     * Mamoru line art slightly altered (the odd line continued longer, etc)
- Panel 3 tweaks:
     * screentone dots no longer overlap "~~~~っ" speech bubble
     * tail of "~~~~っ" speech bubble moved to overlap Usagi's arm
     * second side of collar added to Usagi's uniform, bottom of shirt redrawn
- Panel 4 line art cleaned up (lines added on Usagi's hair, shirt; motion line no longer goes beyond left border)
- Panel 5 lines added to bottom of Usagi's shirt

p. 13 (19)
- Panel 1 signs change from hand-written to computer-typed (the amount of one sale changes from 70% to 60%! What a shame!)
- Panel 2 tail added to lower speech bubble
- Panel 3 "---" removed in front of text

p. 14 (20)
- Panel 1changes:
     * text changed from "くっそ~~~" to "はあ~~~" (meaning stays approximately the same)
     * dark cloud scribble redrawn, now contained within speech bubble
- Panel 2 "クラウン" signage on building cleaned up (inner stroke on lettering made straighter, characters shorter overall); line art of and near vertical sign cleaned up
- Panel 3 changes:
     * image of Sailor V completely replaced with new drawing (now showing more details of top half of uniform; crescent moon on forehead plainly visible; background now a slick radial gradient)
     * text inside top left star burst changed from "new" to "pnp presents" with silhouette of bunny head behind
     * text on poster changed from "誕生!! / セーラーV / 最後のアクションゲーム" to "the new and powerful / Sailor V / the champion of justice / ultra action game / - 最後のアクションゲーム - " (where slashes indicate new lines, one underneath another)
     * sound effects coming from game center made smaller
- Panel 4 changes:
     * ellipses removed in front of "いいなあ"
     * Usagi line art cleaned up (hair)
     * screentone added to briefcase
     * sound effects ("ピシューン") added, made smaller
     * speech bubble that said "クソ~~" removed, as well as small puff of air
- Panel 5 tweaks:
     * Usagi line art slightly altered (eyebrows, shadow added under chin)
     * tail added to speech bubble
- Panel 7 changes:
    * image on screen changed completely from abstract lines to abstract gradient with blobs and starbursts
    * sound effects ("ピシューン") removed (on right), rewritten smaller and contained within speech bubble (on left)
    * tail added to "え---っ" speech bubble

p. 15 (21)
- Panel 1 "ピシューン" sound effect made smaller, now contained within border
- Panel 2
     * "ドキッ" sound effect made smaller, now contained within border
     * line art cleaned up (back of Usagi's collar inked in, machine in background drawn in more completely)
- Panel 3 changes:
     * text in introduction text box added: from  "やさしいの" to "カッコよくて やさしいの"
- Panel 5 tweaks:
     * Luna cleaned up (crescent moon no longer has a stroke around it, dot to represent mouth removed)
     * sound effect "とことこ" removed, along with surprise lines near speech bubble, and motion lines near tail
- Panel 6 Usagi line slightly altered (lines added on shirt, hair)

p. 16 (22)
- Panel 2 tweaks:
     * "?" in right speech bubble rendered bolder, in more rounded font (tail of speech bubble also made larger)
     * Usagi line art slightly altered (her right ear)
     * lines from building no longer overlap uniform bow
     * small hand drawn "あ" with sweatdrop removed from speech bubble
- Panel 3 darker screentone added to briefcase
- Panel 4 changes:
     * Umino line art slightly altered (hair, mouth redrawn)
     * small hand-drawn heart by Umino replaced by screentone heart
     * text added: from "テスト95点だったって" to "海野くん テスト95点だったって" and "うさぎ 何点..." to "うさぎは 何点..." (meaning stays the same)
     * tail added to speech bubble (tiny, near spatula)
- Panel 5 front of Usagi's uniform drawn in fully (shaking motion line around fist removed), line art cleaned up in general

p. 17 (23)
- Panel 1 tweaks:
     * more screentone dots added, along with screen tone spikey ball things
     * Ikuko line art altered slightly (hair, paper in hand)
- Panel 5 "進悟~~~" speech bubble now contained within border (text size slightly smaller as a result)
- Panel 6 Usagi line art slightly altered (lines on sleeves added, hair)

p. 18 (24)
- Panel 1 "じい~ん" sound effect added near leg

p. 19 (25)
- Panel 2 changes:
     * text change: from "なんか パワー" to "なんだか パワー"
     * Line art cleaned up (shadow added on girl's legs, lines added on dress)
- Panel 3 Mrs. Osaka line art slightly altered (hair)
- Panel 5 changes:
     * text no longer hand-written, now in standard font
     * text "イタダク" changed from katakana to hiragana (now "いただく")
- Panel 6 line art no longer overlaps onto speech bubble
- Panel 7 Mrs. Osaka line art slightly altered (more curls added near right side of panel)

p. 20 (26)
- Panel 1 Usagi line art slightly altered (hair, collar bone lines added)
- Panel 2 changes:
     * text on notebook changed from "えーご" (ご) to "English" (meaning says the same)
     * sketch of smiling bunny head changes to generic bunny head
- Panel 3 tweaks:
     * Usagi line art slightly altered (hair, shadow on neck filled in)
     * screentone star added on far left of panel (matches the others)
     * tails added to both speech bubbles
- Panel 4
     * Usagi line art slightly altered (hair, bottom of shirt)
     * tail added to "ちょっとだけ" speech bubble

p. 21 (27)
- Panel 1 tweaks:
     * hair ornaments added (those pearl clip things)
     * stroke around text made thicker (now easier to read)
- Panel 2 tweaks:
     * spikey ball screentone added to background
     * stroke around text made thicker (now easier to read)
- Panel 3
     * line art slightly altered (chains, Luna, Usagi's hair, ear; pearl clips added)
     * stroke around text made thicker (now easier to read)
- Panel 4 changes:
     * text "ハゲ" changes from hand-written to computer typed (and bolded)
     * text "ネコちゃんを..." moved down to accommodate redrawn Luna eyes (now less round, smaller eyebows)
     * hand-drawn star replaced by screentone star
     * stroke around text made thicker (now easier to read)
- Panel 5 change:
     * comment side bar removed completely, replaced by (an old) SD sketch of Usagi crying [image]

p. 22 (28)
- Panel 1 hand-drawn star replaced by screentone star
- Panel 3 tweaks:
     * hand-drawn star replaced by screentone star (same type as in previous point)
     * Luna's eyelashes cleaned up
- Panel 4 Mouth drawn in for Usagi
- Panel 5 strokes around moon, whiskers removed; highlight on tip of tail cleaned up

p. 23 (29)
- Panel 1 tweaks:
     * tail added to "うさぎちゃん" speech bubble
     * Usagi line art slightly altered (hair, her right shoulder)
- Panel 2 highlights removed from Luna's head
- Panel 3 tweaks:
     * tail added to "見つから" speech bubble
     * Usagi line art slightly altered (hair, her right shoulder, nose; bow possibly added although this might be a cropping issue with my original edition)
     * screentone shading on Usagi's nose removed

p. 24 (30)
- Panel 1 tweaks:
     * line art slightly altered (Usagi's hair, bottom of shirt; edge of bed fully drawn; screentone in between swish lines)
     * "ぱたっ" sound effect rewritten smaller, no longer busts out of border
- Panel 2 sweatdrop cleaned up
- Panel 3 highlights removed from Luna's head
- Panel 4 changes:
     * Usagi line art altered, looks to be in new style (hair, mouth smaller, chest reduced)
     * small glowing star screentone added around Usagi
     * brooch simplified (no swirly lines inside crescent moon, no detail inside star or droplet, every circle is perfect)
     * screentone shadow, glow added around brooch;  screentone shading on brooch added
- Panel 5 change:
     * Usagi line art slightly altered (hair, bottom of shirt, screentone added to front bow)
     * reflection in mirror fully redrawn (complete with shading and glare on mirror); bottom of mirror fully drawn

p. 25 (31)
- Panel 1 changes:
     * line art completely redrawn, although the hands remain very similar (changes include visible neck, edges of collar and bow, visible shoulders)
     * brooch identical to on p. 23 (30), will henceforth be used as a stock image
     * screentone changed, but remains similar type
     * more hand-drawn sparkles drawn; "キラキラ" sound effect moved down, made larger
- Panel 2 tweaks:
     * Luna cleaned up (distinguishable neck, redrawn  face, no stroke around eyes or moon)
     * speech bubble cut-off, contained within panel
     * tail added to left speech bubble
- Panel 3 tweaks:
     *  Usagi line art slightly altered (bottom of shirt; details added to brooch, but is not the stock image)
     * screentone removed from bottom of shirt, hand-drawn sparkles and "キラキラ" sound effect added
     * speed lines added in background
- Panel 4 tweaks:
     * highlights removed from Luna's head and her left leg
     * Luna's right paw redrawn, 4 paw pads added
     * Luna's whiskers redrawn, now come out of cheeks and not top of head
     * border of panel shortened on left side
     * speed lines redrawn, now straight and do not overlap speech bubble
     * tail added to speech bubble
- Panel 5 tweaks:
     * speech bubble now contained within border
     * stock brooch added
     * hand-drawn sparkles added
     * stripes on collar visible

p. 26 (32)
- Panel 1 changes:
     * stock brooch added
     * screentone changed, two new kinds added (in background and surrounding brooch)
     * hand-drawn sparkles added; "キラキラ" sound effect removed
     * outline of speech bubble changed, small (yelling!) Luna and bunny heads added in bubble
     * panels now have black outlines; added white space between panels
     * "---" removed in front of, and after, text
- Panel 2 changes:
     * completely redrawn, but exact same concept (takes up less of page)
     * screentone changed in background, screentone added on cuffs
     * outline of speech bubble changed
     * "---" removed in front of text
     * "パアッ" sound effect removed
+ Panel 3 added:
     * small full body drawing of Usagi with hands over chest (a la last panel), hair and skirt flying around her, yelling, added
    * "アッ" sound effect added

p. 27 (33)
- Panel 1changes:
     * completely redrawn in new style, mirror image (Sailor Moon now faces right);  alterations too many to name, but gloves appear tighter
     * screentone in background altered (same type, but blurrier)
     * screentone stars appear in place of hand-drawn star and crying lines in speech bubbles
- Panel 2 tweaks:
     * Sailor Moon line art slightly altered (hair, lines removed from gloves to appear tighter)
     * glow effect added to hair ornaments (line art faded to achieve this)

p. 28 (34)
- Panel 3 screentone changed on mask (glare all over, not just upper right)
- Panel 4 Sailor Moon line art slightly altered (skirt, gloves, her right hand)
- Panel 5 tweaks:
     * screentone changed on mask (glare on left side, no longer on right)
     * screentone action lines added, coming away from mask
     * hand-drawn star, crying lines, and speech bubble redrawn smaller; lower sweatdrop removed; bubbles now drawn to be separate
- Panel 6 Luna's face cleaned up (eyebrows smaller, stroke around features not as thick, cheek lines removed)
- Panel 7 Sailor Moon line art slightly altered (hair, collar, her right earring)

p. 29 (35)
- Panel 1 tweaks:
     * Luna's face cleaned up (eyebrows smaller, stroke around features not as thick)
     * angry bunny head added to speech bubble
- Panel 2 Mrs. Osaka line art slightly altered (hair, earring)
- Panel 3 tweaks:
     * "ベリっ" sound effect rewritten in all katakana (ベリッ), now contained by top border of panel, stroke not as thick
     * youma line art slightly altered (shoulder smaller, more lines on face)
- Panel 4  changes:
     * shadow of Tuxedo Kamen redrawn to include top hat

p. 30 (36)
- Panel 1 changes:
     * text change in right bubble: from "はなれなさいよっ" to "はなれなさいッ!" (meaning remains the same)
     * text change in left bubble: from "このごうつくババアッ!" to "この怪物ババアッ!!"
     * tail added to right speech bubble
- Panel 2 tweaks:
     * "さっ" sound effect added near bottom of panel
     * Tuxedo Kamen line art slightly altered (shoulder clasp added, his left sleeve finished)
- Panel 3 tweaks:
     * more speed lines added
     * youma line art slightly altered (more lines on face, mouth, hair)
     * star and crying lines removed from "えっ!?" speech bubble
- Panel 4 ellipses removed from speech bubble, text moved slightly down
- Panel 5 hand-drawn moon replaced by screentone moon

p. 31 (37)
- Panel 2 changes:
     * Sailor Moon completely redrawn in new style, but keeps same pose (really, more like a cleaned up, slightly altered image); changes include bow made smaller, waist made thicker, hair, back bow, collar
     * stock brooch added
     * background slightly altered (more stars, less speckles, blurred existing screentone)
     * all strokes around Sailor Moon and speech bubble cleaned up (smoother, more consistent thickness) and made to glow
     * moon in the sky cleaned up (possibly now done by computer)

p. 32 (38)
- Panel 1 tweaks:
     * youma line art slightly altered (more lines on face, screen tone no longer covers hand)
     * "---" removed in front of "目ざめよ"
- Panel 2 glowing screentone no longer goes beyond top border of panel
- Panel 3 tweaks:
     * shine removed from girl's hair
     * "むくっ" sound effect cleaned up
- Panel 4 tweaks:
     * "ざっ" sound effects rewritten smaller, no longer go beyond bottom border of panel
     * line art slightly altered (clothing drawn in more completely, pattern added to shirt of girl with short dark hair)
- Panel 6 tweaks:
     * "がしゃんっ" sound effect no longer goes beyond top border of panel
     * screentone removed from background eyes
     * more lines added on face of girl smashing bottle

p. 33 (39)
- Panel 1 tweaks:
     * more lines added on face of girl smashing bottle
     * thicker stroke around image of falling Sailor Moon, line art cleaned up (hair)
     * "きゃんっ" speech bubble no longer goes beyond bottom border of panel
- Panel 2 Sailor Moon line art slightly altered (hair, hair ornaments; choker added)
- Panel 3 tweaks:
     * Sailor Moon line art slightly altered (hair, her right arm)
     * screentone stars moved to cover crying lines
     * speech bubbles no longer go beyond bottom border of panel
     * Luna head added to "なにしてんの" speech bubble
     * motion lines no longer overlap "なにしてんの" speech bubble
- Panel 4 tweaks:
     * line art slightly altered (Sailor Moon's hair ornaments, youma hand)
     * rightmost speech bubbles no longer go beyond top border of panel, tail moved closer to Luna
     * motion lines no longer overlap "ええっ?!" speech bubble
- Panel 5 Sailor Moon line art slightly altered (hair, hair ornaments), outline of speech bubble cleaned up

p. 34 (40)
- Panel 1 Sailor Moon line art slightly altered (hair, tears; choker and elbows added)
- Panel 4 line art slightly altered (dresses drawn more completely, youma's hair)
- Panel 5 changes:
     * crescent moon no longer hand-drawn
     * highlights removed from Tuxedo Kamen's left shoulder, left arm, right shoe
     * small hand-drawn speech bubble ("ああ~ん" with crying lines) removed

p. 35 (41)
- Panel 1 changes:
     * text change: from " "フリスビー" ってさけんでなげて" to " "ムーン・ティアラ・ブーメラン" ってさけんで!" (change in attack name!)
    * line art slightly altered (Sailor Moon's hair ornaments, Luna's face cleaned up)
- Panel 2 tiara line art cleaned up, smoother screentone, faded on top left
- Panel 3 changes:
     * Sailor Moon completely redrawn in new style, but keeps same pose (really, more like a cleaned up, slightly altered image); changes include hair, more prominent neck, tighter boots and gloves, different screentone on skirt (skirt also slightly changed on left)
     * text changed from "ムーン フリスビー" to "ムーン・ティアラ・ブーメラン!!"

     * tiara line art changed to a more perfect stock image (more detail on jewel)
     * blur, blurred motion lines, and glowing screentone added to and around tiara
     * "ざっ" and "ぎゃっ" sound effects (contained within speech bubble) removed
- Panel 4 changes:
     * stock tiara added (plus blur and blurred motion lines)
     * youma line art redrawn
     * screentone changed behind youma (cross hatching to gradient lines); different motion lines around panel
     * "スパッ" and "ぎゃあ" sound effects (contained within speech bubble) added
     * bottom border of panel added
- Panel 5 youma line art redrawn, more screentone added

p. 36 (42)
- Panel 1 tweaks:
     * youma line art cleaned up (outline of head); more screentone added
     * motion line screentone added around "うそ..." text
     * "うそ..." text moved to fit in white space above, to the left of Sailor Moon's head
     * ellipses removed (both occurrences), "!?" added after  "うそ"
- Panel 2 tweaks:
     * tail of speech bubble moved to top bubble (from bottom)
     * bottom speech bubble ("オモシロイ...") no longer covers top of Sailor Moon's head
     * Sailor Moon line art slightly altered (hair ornaments, cheek lines added)

p. 37 (43)
- Panel 1 tweaks:
     * highlights removed from Tuxedo Kamen's hair, his right knee, tail of jacket
     * shadows of left side of cape altered (continue further down)
     * line added below Tuxedo Kamen's lips
     * speckles in background altered (finer in general; larger dots erased from front of pants and near moon)
- Panel 2 Sailor Moon line art slightly altered (bottom of lip now closer to mouth)

p. 38 (44)
- Panel 1 tweaks:
     * "わたしの名は" speech bubble moved up to no longer overlap Tuxedo Kamen's hair (as much); tail made larger; "---" removed in front of text
     * "セーラームーン" speech bubble redrawn smaller, now fits into space above buildings (no longer goes beyond left border of panel); tail added
- Panel 2 screentone made more subtle (different kind of glowing balls)

p. 39 (45)
- Panel 1 tweaks:
     * glowing heart screentone added around text, bottom of panel
     * tiny hand-drawn heart below text removed
- Panel 2 Luna's face cleaned up (no strokes around lines)
- Panel 4 glowing ball screentone replaced by glowing heart screentone
- Panel 5 line art slightly altered (lines added on clothing, hair)

p. 40 (46)
- Panel 1 tweaks:
     * Sailor Moon line art slightly altered (hair, hearts as eyes larger)
     * hand-drawn sweatdrop removed from speech bubble
- Panel 2 glowing heart screentone added
- Panel 3 tails added to both speech bubbles
- Panel 4 Jadeite's hair cleaned up (fewer stray lines)

p. 41 (47)
- Panel 1 line art slightly altered (crying lines removed, tail added to left speech bubble, collar bone line added)
- Panel 2 line art slightly altered (crying lines, sweatdrop, puff of air removed; crying lines added back inside speech bubble; buildings and trees drawn more completely; collar bone lines added on Kuri)
- Panel 3 top of Usagi's head kept within striped box
- Panel 4 stock brooch added
- Panel 6 tweaks:
     * Usagi line art slightly altered (hair, bottom of shirt)
     * Luna's face cleaned up (no strokes around lines, mouth made smaller)
     * stock brooch added
 
 
 
mizugazipan on June 17th, 2008 01:36 am (UTC)
I love this project of yours! I hope to see more! <3